My heart was a scar covered stone,
With unpolished blemishes of pain.
Ironically my carver is the brutal world,
That helped, Uncover the gem of a kind!
One that is difficult to find…
About which it’s often spoken.
A heart made of diamonds
One that cannot be broken!

Beautifully written, V! The harsh rending away to find the inner beauty is delivered with eloquence and brevity. Metaphorically striking!
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Thanks a lot Brad, I know sometimes my writing does get harsh, but I do feel true beauty is carved out of tough circumstances, like a diamond, its the story of everyone!
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Very beautiful!
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Thanks for reading π
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βUncover the gem of a kind…one that is difficult to findβ
This line is electric! Thank you for this!
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Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating my work, ππ
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You are very welcome!
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I am glad you are taking time and reading my work, if you like it I request you to go thorough my other poetries and proses and your comments are much appreciated. Thanks a lot π
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It is easy and fun because you have very loving work! Keep going, it is making an impact!
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Thanks a lot, your words are very kind and motivating π
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Amazing π
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Thanks a lot for reading Kritika π
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My pleasure π
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