A beautiful mind

A story of a beautiful mind

Twisted but always kind

Forever guides an easy way,

“Push yourself hard “ what the world says

Dear mind, what are we together?

Were we ever made for each other?

Am I you, are we the same?

Or two different entities

with a common name..

At times to decides,

Our action divides,

What has to be a conclusion

Becomes a huge confusion

To what I ever agree

Why do you disagree

We were friends, not foe?

Why we stooped so low..

It’s time for a change

As we are deranged

You are a possession of mine

Gifted by the ultimate divine

While our struggle remains

This is still not the end game

We can conquer feats together

If we try and trust each other

For its a story of a beautiful mind

Very precious, one of a kind!!

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15 comments

  1. Hi Beautiful Mind, this is one of a kind. Thank you for visiting me. Don’t miss my poetry page on my website and feel free to comment. PS. I would have loved to share your poem. but guess you own all rights. I am on a Creative Commons license but all rights are reserved as well as to concern poems by my guests. Congrats for 1000 followers; you are my 123rd in two years…. and half of them try to sell me something 😀 can do it and Happy Holidays to you. Antonella xx

     
    • Thanks for visiting my site. And share your perspective, I will surely visit and consider. Really appreciate you taking out time to comment on my work. Happy holidays, tc😊

       
  2. Were we ever made for each other?

    Am I you, are we the same?

    Or two different entities…..

    The poet questions the mind but in the real sense, there are no different entities there is a connection with us and our mind. Together we achieve many things and conquer feats together

     
  3. The internal dialogue of the Id in this piece is provoking. Rarely do we see the Id as anything less than the conceptualized player in the ego psychology model. Here you have rightly questioned this accepted view of it as modifier and saddled it with a tone of responsibility. Beautifully crafted and intellectual!

     

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