I was fortunate to witness a spectacle,
A Cresent moon and the lovely Venus are hanging together in the night sky,
And look how full he is with joy, even though incomplete this day ,
How the warm embrace of the aphrodite makes him soulfully complete,
Look how they blush at each other with that yellowish red tint,
While they enjoy their company,even the dark sky is lighted bright,
By their radiant hues, a perfect ambiance for the celestial couple,
This stellar moment, reminds me of you,
How you make an emotionally incomplete me as blissfully complete us,
I think I am your Cresent moon and you, my evening star!

What a great depiction of star-crossed lovers. Luxurious and lyrical! A joy to read.
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Thanks for reading Brad πI like this one which I just wrote, this evening I saw the Cresent moon and Venus, hence felt like writing.
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Lovely. π
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Thanks for reading π
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You are welcome. π
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This is beautiful, Rain. What an amazing description, and beautiful imagery.
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Thanks a lot for readingπ
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Beautiful poem.
I also saw that beautiful spectacle of Venus and the crescent moon together in the sky last night where I live.
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Thanks for reading π Great that you witnessed it
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Description is beautiful. The two lovers glowing in each others presence. π
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Thanks for reading Kritika π
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Excellent! My husband had just come from a meeting. The sky had cleared and he was talking about the moon and Venus!
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Thanks for reading π Happy that he could witness π
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Wonderful poem β€ I enjoyed reading it very much!
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Thanks a lot for reading π
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Thanks for reading π
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This is exquisite
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Thanks a lot for reading π
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You’re welcome
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Thanks for reading π
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You are most welcome
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Such sweetness! You capture the magic beautifully. I was in awe witnessing this event yesterday and now again, stumbling across your post. =)
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Thanks a lot for reading and your wonderful comment π
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You’re welcome!
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I love that you took the time so see more fully what so many of us would pass off as just a crescent moon and Venus in the evening sky. There truly is something spectacular in this moment you captured and how you extended that in the final three lines. A delight!
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Thanks a lot for reading and such a wonderful comment π
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