I was once the brightest light within you,
Too shiny, that it blinded your insights,
Hence you banished me into the darkness,
Only to be an invisible shadow by your side.
Yes, I am the thought that you cannot comprehend,
Yes, I am the eerie feeling that you cannot defend,
Yes, I am the you that does not false pretend,
Yes, I am the sorrow that you hardly withstand,
Yes, I am the force with which your heart expands,
I am the one whom you can never understand!
Yes, I can be the one that can drive,
Yes, I can be the one to make you strive,
Yes, If my meaning you can never derive,
Possibly all your solace, I will deprive!
So make your mind crystal clear,
Open your heart to me my dear,
Let me reside inside you at the rear,
For even if you reject I would be near,
You can’t forget me, I am your fear!!

Wowwwwwww. This is so intensely profound, and achingly beautiful! Well freaking done! 😍🙌🏼
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Thanks a lot for reading and such wonderful comments 😊
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Such imagery and descriptions here my friend. Well done, kudos👏
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Thanks a lot for reading 😊, stay well and safe 😊
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You as well my friend, it’s always a pleasure!! Really enjoying the creativity boom out of so many on here! Keep it up❤😊
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so powerful
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Thanks Weimiao 😊
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A powerful representation with vivid imagery, beautiful hyperbole, and a chanting tonal quality and flow. Sometimes your darker images shine the brightest. Well written!
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Thanks a lot for reading 😊
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lovely!
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Thanks for reading 😊
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This piece is amazing!
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Thanks a lot for reading 😊
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Though Dark,a strong light on the most dreaded emotion – fear. I loved reading this !!
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Thanks a lot for reading 😊
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A wonderful and yet a haunting piece. It was amazing to read.
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Thanks a lot for reading 😊
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I loved your content,its amazing. How you put forth it so easy to understand. Beautifully written on overcoming fear .
Keep writing and inspiring us.
By the way i write too.
Check me out.
https://unfcukwithable.wordpress.com/2020/06/05/how-to-overcome-fear-of-failure/
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