Rain Alchemist

I Don’t know why I broke

I know it was right whatever you spoke,

But still I don’t know why I broke,

I fell on surface of my self-designed feeling,

With an incurable pain incapable of healing…

Was my fate like those delicate wine glasses?

it always has to shatter even on the velvety carcasses,

you said, for you it does not matter…

did you know for me, it was only you who mattered?

I feel, I am standing at the edge of your heart’s door…

it’s so dark within, nothing my mind can explore…

will you not allow me in, will you not show me the unseen.

will you not make a space for me within, will you not ask me where have you been?

I thought you were the reflection of my heart,

but never realized why we fell apart,

you told me, reflections are unreal like ghostly apparition,

what’s real is, our separation…

Was my love only capable of your rejection?

was I wrong, when I felt our souls had a connection…!!

I know it was right whatever you spoke,

but still I don’t know why I broke…

Re-posting one of my poetry very close to my heart.
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I am Vinayak and I go by the poetry name Rain Alchemist. Writing has been my passion from a long time and this blog is to contain the reservoir of my work. I am not a genre specific writer, I believe thoughts have endless forms and can be shaped into any genre. I am grateful that I can express my thoughts through my poems and writings. I love reading great work and would be delighted to meet like minded poets and writers. That's all for now, and yes, if you do visit my blog, do say hello, I would be delighted if you say hi. Thanks

11 comments

  2. I feel this one most strongly in a strange way since I’ll never know the truth of some things bad can’t seem to just believe the words I heard. Thank you for writing it, you have some fantastic work.

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  4. Vinayak, your imagery, openess, and genuine words never fail to touch me in some way. You have your own unique style and voice. I can always be assured to find something unexpected when I visit. Well done, my friend!

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