Rain Alchemist

Gravity of love

You walked in my life like a marvellous storm,

Rearranging me anew as for long, I was deformed,

In my life you brought a lot of wonderful commotion,

Swirling around my strongest, sharpest emotions,

Gravelled feelings rose above the surface of my heart, defying gravity,

Because they aimed to reach the sky, as you were like a heavenly deity,

I thought to have tasted the ecstatic sweetness of successful love,

That I imagined, I had the forever happiness of fluttering doves,

But you were a mystery, like you came, you were gone,

Leaving my world astray, I was again lost and alone,

As my longing for you, tremored into painful raging jolts,

The ascended affections arrowered my heart as deep piercing bolt,

Sure there was a lot of agony before all went numb,

I kept thinking, why this happened, why I was so dumb,

Now I keep a watch for any spectacular storm of a same intensity,

Keeping my sentiments at bay, never allowing them to elude gravity!!

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I am Vinayak and I go by the poetry name Rain Alchemist. Writing has been my passion from a long time and this blog is to contain the reservoir of my work. I am not a genre specific writer, I believe thoughts have endless forms and can be shaped into any genre. I am grateful that I can express my thoughts through my poems and writings. I love reading great work and would be delighted to meet like minded poets and writers. That's all for now, and yes, if you do visit my blog, do say hello, I would be delighted if you say hi. Thanks

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  3. An exceptional poem, Vinayak! You lyrically take us on this journey with such vivid images and stringent words. And you close with such power. A remarkable piece of work and some of your best! Well written, my friend!

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